Alone

Alone

A Poem by BeccaB

Sitting all alone

Lots to decide

 

Thinking about my life

Not a lot's right

 

But should I let it

Stop me going on...

 

Maybe yes

And maybe no

 

Either way

I'll never know

© 2011 BeccaB


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Sometimes ones gotta do the best they can on their own.
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Posted 8 Years Ago


I agree with Chris on this one. Insightful truly! The simplicity of this poem is almost crying out to let itself be heard through the loneliness. Great piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its almost a song I can hear the Pixies singing :) very nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


great ending, sums it up to a perfect point! nice work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the flow of this good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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TJ
Love this Becca! I like pieces of brevity bc they test the author's ability to pack much power into few words. You succeeded

Posted 12 Years Ago


^^

(I died! It's perfect!)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 26, 2011
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BeccaB
BeccaB

Darlington, County Durham, United Kingdom



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