Dear Santa

Dear Santa

A Poem by .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
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Very Cliche' Story of asking Santa for a man!

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It's Christmas time,
It seems everyone as fallen in love
but when will I find my number one
sent from up above?

 

I'm really too old to believe in Santa
but this is my last chance.
Santa I'm asking you
to send me some romance.

 

Make him kind of tall
with preferably dark hair.
Give him a big heart
so maybe he will care.

 

Give him long arms
to wrap tightly around me.
Make his mouth utter those words
that mean we're meant to be.


P.s. Give rudolph a kiss from me for good luck
And pray that on Christmas night his nose lights up
For all the children who's hearts would be broken,
If of Saint Nic, Not another word was spoken.

© 2008 .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.


Author's Note

.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
Nothing is perfect,Don't be too harsh please!!

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Something we all hope for, you managed to put the request into words.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah! This is wonderful, i like your P.S. This is wonderful, i like this. It's sincere

Posted 15 Years Ago


Anthor great write!!!! i love how you were asking santa.. very creative!!! LOVE IT
hugs
alyssa

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweetly moving, like a song! Love the gentle request of Santa, holding to a deep sense of childlike hope from the precious heart of a woman. Beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nothing wrong with wanting the greatest gift God gave us... I thought this was very endearing and sweet.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought this was really cute!

I hope you get what you asked for! lol

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 4, 2008

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.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
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My Name is Rebekah but everyone calls me Beck or Beckah or my fav Cup^E^Cake & I was born in Ohio but Raised in the south. My poems are about things that really happend some where in my life weather .. more..

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