wilderness

wilderness

A Poem by Laura Grigoras


this wildnerness,
full of lights and noisy people,
the neverending traffic, 
the nights full of stars,
followed by the days and the new starts , 
the faces who are now lost 
and probably became one with the Universe,
the moments when you cried because you were happy,
the moments when you were sad,
that time when something unexpected happened,
that friend who marked you for life,
and the other one
and of course your first love 
and that time your heart got broken,
the song you are never tired of listening,
the Sundays when you don't want to leave your bed,
followed by the Mondays when you felt exactly the same,
your dreams, your aspirations,
those days of meditation,
the fights and the reconcilations,
the days you spent alone and felt in peace with yourself,
when outside was raining, but your soul was smiling,
after that appeared the rainbow
and you took a picture.


© 2018 Laura Grigoras



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I agree. Life is a wild journey. I enjoyed your journey and your thoughts.
"when outside was raining, but your soul was smiling,
after that appeared the rainbow
and you took a picture."
The above lines. Hopeful and wonderful. Thank you Laura for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Grigoras

3 Months Ago

I'm so glad you like it, it means a lot!
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

I did enjoy Laura. A wonderful poem.



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There are so many big issues in this which i think maybe it's down fall i have the feeling that the poem needs to be revisited and either made way more simple or on the other hand let it go much longer i found it very flat it was like reading a shopping list

Posted 3 Months Ago


It is like you can read my mind. This is beautiful and not only I can relate, but I'm sure many others can as well. I love your poems and keep writing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thoughts and memories ramble through our minds like an army marching out of step in all directions but out. The occasional rainbow clears a path to a new day. Still, some can’t find the bus fair

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree. Life is a wild journey. I enjoyed your journey and your thoughts.
"when outside was raining, but your soul was smiling,
after that appeared the rainbow
and you took a picture."
The above lines. Hopeful and wonderful. Thank you Laura for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Grigoras

3 Months Ago

I'm so glad you like it, it means a lot!
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

I did enjoy Laura. A wonderful poem.
I love your writing it’s absolutely amazing

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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