Muse

Muse

A Poem by Deepak Belbase
"

She is my mother, sister, daughter and my wife More than a thing that she might...

"

To every single woman of this world


She  is not  beautiful  but has a  beautiful soul
She  is not  complete in  herself but completes  my whole

there  is something  that attracts me towards  her

she  has the energy  to control my critter

She  is my  mother, sister,  daughter, and wife

She  is more  than a thing,  that she might

But  She Tells me  something and does something else

I  don’t  know her  but I'd claimed to know her well

I'm not her god,  who'd just came for her

and  she has  to fight alone  with my monster

I  don’t  know if  she could  do it better than what  I’ve done

But  there are some marks on the depth of her heart

that  always  betray her  whenever she  tried to start

There is  a sadness  in her eyes

But  I know  her hope of bring me back to life

and I've learned it when she kissed me in the moonlight,  

and  I know that there would be no sign of love

without her existence ...


sh va

© 2018 Deepak Belbase


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Very nice gesture to all the women you mentioned above :)
Heart touching and respectable words. Beautifully written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A woman with many facades and it sounds like you are accepting and loving of them all. Love can be complicated for us sometimes as parts of this poem suggests. Beautiful job, Deepak

Posted 6 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your time...
this is so sweet!! i do have a suggestion though. read through the piece and fix the sentences that sound a bit off to you, or the grammar. that will make the piece even better :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your time
Well written,
However in my opinion, you can easily write even a better poem than that....good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on July 12, 2017
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Deepak Belbase
Deepak Belbase

Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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Deepak Belbasé, writing under my pen name sh va I’m 27 years old young man writing poetry and lyrics. You may call me a poet. Writing brings so many things to my life desire, passion, dr.. more..

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