I Think I'm Falling For You

I Think I'm Falling For You

A Poem by WritersSoul
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yeah, it happened again, not so much drama this time though

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Yeah I look at your pictures when I think about you,
But that's only because I think i'm falling for you

Yeah I think about you more and more often,
But that's only because I think i'm falling for you.

Yeah I might look at you as you walk past me and act as if i'm invisible,
But that's only because I think i'm falling for you.

Yeah I feel these certain feelings for you,
But that's only because I think i'm falling for you.

Yeah I wish there was a miracle to grant me one wish I want the Most and just want
ONCE,
But that's only because I think i'm falling for you.

Yeah I wish there was a 'Me &You',
But that's only because I think i'm falling for you.

Yeah I cry when I find out you are already an 'Item' with someone,
But that's only because I think i'm falling for you.

Yeah I might be selfish to not fall again from all the Hate, Disappointment and Suffering,
But that's only because I think i'm falling for you.

Seriously?
I know i'm falling for you,
But I never wanted to!
I didn't chose you,
My heart did!

I know it may not be my time, yet...
But Oh how I wish it was... :'(



© 2011 WritersSoul



Author's Note

WritersSoul
Tell me what you think... yeah this is kinda crushing me right now....

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I know it's sad but I find this really cute. It's like fighting against yourself whether to just raise your hands up and surrender to love or fight against it. Well, anyway, I love how you repeated the line over and over again! So despite putting random things, different scenarios, varied feelings, the poem still flowed smoothly. I really liked it. Just one thing though... "didn't choose" Sorry, "didn't chose" just sounded weird when I was reading it, so I can't ignore it. :| Other than that, this is brilliant. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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my favorite lines
"Seriously?
I know i'm falling for you,
But I never wanted to!
I didn't chose you,
My heart did!"
... Those lines right there are so brilliant to me and that tells me that this poem came from your heart. This is such a beautiful piece of writing.



Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the repetition, it makes it very emotional. A lovely but saddened poem xx

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. It a has very emotional take. Nice work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Seriously?
I know i'm falling for you,
But I never wanted to!
I didn't chose you,
My heart did!"
I can really relate to this...
When our minds battle with our hearts, it is hard to decide...
Love is so painful that it broke so many loving hearts in this world...
You've penned this well...Nicely done...
:)))

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh yes!!!!
Who the heart and soul fallin love with cannot be controlled, no matter
what the mind thinks....
the endless imagination, what if's etc etc take over.....
all this perfectly conveyed in this awesome poem :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know it's sad but I find this really cute. It's like fighting against yourself whether to just raise your hands up and surrender to love or fight against it. Well, anyway, I love how you repeated the line over and over again! So despite putting random things, different scenarios, varied feelings, the poem still flowed smoothly. I really liked it. Just one thing though... "didn't choose" Sorry, "didn't chose" just sounded weird when I was reading it, so I can't ignore it. :| Other than that, this is brilliant. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's always about the heart that always wants it wants and the mind always thinks better. always.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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WritersSoul
WritersSoul

South Shields, bloop, United Kingdom



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I am Beth/Bethan/Terri-Beth as my friends like to call, and I'm 15, 29/04/96, and started writing when I was about 13..? And now I get depression really bad and do things I should'nt and thats why I w.. more..

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