F*** Falling For You!!

F*** Falling For You!!

A Poem by WritersSoul
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With my dads..., i dont think my new year could get any worse finding out from a friend tht the guy i rlly like is now back with his ex,feel like cutting every inch of my body but im stronger thn that

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Yeah you knew I liked you
Yeah I didn't say anything
Yet
I knew you still felt for your ex

Yeah I tried my best
You felt for me a little
I have my sources
Now you dont and I felt sick

People told me to give up
I felt like ripping my hair out
People told me to hold on
I felt like being sick

Now I'm tearing at my face
Rubbing my eyes
Staring at blank screens
Music of death all over me

The lyrics roaming my skin and bones
The blank screens show me your face
My eyes are sick f bleeding for you
Now my face is sore and red

Your ex must be happy
What a laugh cause I'm not
I guess you feel happier
Cause I feel gilted
Even though I know you really liked your ex

Now my life sucks
I should've never have fallen for you
My eyes will cry their last tear
And I will hide from you forever
Incase I do something I'd regret

© 2012 WritersSoul


Author's Note

WritersSoul
I now hate my life even more... yey

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Great poem! You portrayed your emotions so well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome poem relating so well..........
ex is one such issue..
love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice work and great portrayal of emotions. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you have no clue how well i can relate to this...just not the whole ex. thing.... you did a great job :) (obviously hes to stupid not to like you back!)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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WritersSoul
WritersSoul

South Shields, bloop, United Kingdom



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I am Beth/Bethan/Terri-Beth as my friends like to call, and I'm 15, 29/04/96, and started writing when I was about 13..? And now I get depression really bad and do things I should'nt and thats why I w.. more..

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