David

David

A Poem by Elizabeth
"

He's dead and this is the best I could do.

"


We all take things
to our graves.

I wonder who you took
to yours.
 


© 2015 Elizabeth



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Brief and powerful.
Your poems linger in the consciousness long after the reading is done.
I hope you find peace.
Z.

Posted 1 Year Ago


That is powerful and sad. x

Posted 2 Years Ago


Elizabeth

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. It was sad.
Two stanzas with two lines only. Does that reflect how it's such a personal thing, just you and him? I'm sorry for your loss if that's the case.

Beautifully written even though it's short. Reminds me of a Philip Larkin style. Straight to the meat and no funny business. That's good!

Final stanza is chilling. We all have our secrets. And that's what makes people so interesting!



Posted 2 Years Ago


Elizabeth

2 Years Ago

I suppose that is exactly why the piece is so short. I am a fan of brevity in my writing anyway, I s.. read more
WOWZA... powerful words in a short writing... one death can effect many lives.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Great write!! I'm taking a can of mixed nuts...in case the squirrels come for a visit.:)

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Elizabeth
Elizabeth

Wonderland, TN



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