Poison Apples

Poison Apples

A Poem by Elizabeth




poison apples
taste sweeter
with sugar

salt in an open wound
tickles
if you close your eyes

and lies are the truth
if you stand
on your head

© 2011 Elizabeth



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yumm. sugar is good. not on poison apples though. good piece of writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


mmm... sugar. if only it, was good for us.

tickles... behind closed eyes, anything... is possible
and
the last stanza: is why you're my favorite writer.

because : you see: it's straight forward. simple words. : you turn it upside down. and by but. explicitly, turning it , upside done

lies are the truth
up is down
north, south

if you, stand on your head
plus, the title: see? apples, apples apples...
but poisened. how, we forget the word, poisoned.
thanks for the reminder

Posted 6 Years Ago


The truth of it is, it's all true. An excellent representation of everything that is wrong in thiscrazy upside down and sidewise world. Great write, great flow.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tickles and cleanses, too! Awesome piece, chock full of metaphor, viewing every day suffering with a perspective we could all use. Wonderful, just wonderful. This is the first piece of yours I've read, it intrigues me to delve deeper into your written worlds.

Posted 6 Years Ago


It's short and to the point. Very beautiful and dramatic. My favorite line is "And Lies are the Truth."

Posted 6 Years Ago


An interesting poem- like saying it really doesn't hurt - if we pretend.

Chloe

Posted 6 Years Ago


As the great leonard Cohen once said (or rather sang): "even damnnation is poisoned with rainbows". Great piece!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Truth disguised as playful nonsense. Poison apples, salted wounds and lies are pretty much government issued. (May not have been the poet's specific intention, but it nonetheless applies.)
Like your style, Elizabeth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


everything tastes sweeter
with sugar.
second stanza: is a wonder
as is the third.
love the way you turn things upside down or backwards, with words

Posted 6 Years Ago


Interesting way to change ones view of something to change its affects. Very nice write with great images and meanings. Of course I like the last verse the best as we humans are master of lies and novices at truth.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.

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