Just live for this moment

Just live for this moment

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik
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Just live for this moment..as it won't be there tomorrow..

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JUST LIVE FOR THIS MOMENT….

 

Just live for this moment,

Not for the sake of tomorrow…

Just live for these dreams today,

As they will no longer be there with you after this dawn…

And then, you need not them from someone to borrow….

 

Just for this moment, try to feel the presence of almighty,

Close your eyes and you will feel his voice with full divinity…

Just for this moment, I wanna enter into God’s own garden….

Just for this moment, I wanna take a deep breathe …

Oh! I wanna live… Just for this moment…..

 

Just live for this moment’s charm,

Just live for this hug as it’s too warm….

Just live for this moment,

As who knows, we won’t be there tomorrow…

Just live for your self satisfaction,

And not letting your conscience to be hollow….

 

Just live for this smile, which keeps your heart in full rhyme…

Just live for this moment….

As it’s slipping too fast…….

Just steal a piece of time,

And try to fulfill all your wishes….

As it won’t be there forever….

Just fight for this moment, against all your odds…

And in case if it becomes too hard for you to defend,

Then just smile and smile

As it’s the beginning of a new end…

 

Now this moment is going through the phase of night,

But it taught me a very important lesson of life…..

I just lived with the glory of this moment,

Which will always going to stay in my mind….

And Iam still glancing this sky,

Having different colours of mine….

 

I just lived this moment,

Where I gave my life just to live again….

And thanked God for removing this pain….

For giving me nothing I wanted,

But everything I needed…..

 

So, for this smile, for this joy, this laughter and shine…

I again wanna live for this moment…..

Oh! Just live for this moment…..

Just live for this moment….

As it won’t be there tomorrow….

As it won’t be there tomorrow….

 

 

 


© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik



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A great composition you have over here my friend! Personally, I don't think that you'll get any bad reactions for a composition like this! Anyway, I just want to say you a small thing! Stop reviewing your own writings man! You can put your thoughts in the notes! :-)

About your stuff, well all I can say it is really superb!

I just lived this moment,

Where I gave my life just to live again….

And thanked God for removing this pain….

For giving me nothing I wanted,

But everything I needed…..

these are my favorate lines for this peice! Keep writing! And congo on getting new batches! I can't really keep up with you! ~KA~

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Just steal a piece of time,

And try to fulfill all your wishes.

As it won't be there forever.

Just fight for this moment, against all your odds

And in case if it becomes too hard for you to defend,

Then just smile and smile

As it's the beginning of a new end

I do not know whether these lines are happy or sad, but yes I can feel the emotion which is too deep and the thought too grave, as its the beginning of a new end. very rare expression , I think very honest and goes deep inside the psyche of the reader. These are the lines I think which will come back to me when I am experiencing some deep personal anguish. Very Very honest work straight from the heart.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's so nice...and so inspiring...!!

andAs it won't be there forever.
Just fight for this moment, against all your odds
And in case if it becomes too hard for you to defend,
Then just smile and smile
As it's the beginning of a new end
and this was really so nice...!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great piece of writing, so inspiring.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hey! This is nice, I liked the mixed emotions in it a lot!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked both the opening and closing section of this write..
It can inspire even a dead heart heart to beat for today, without the fear of tomorrow.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Just live for this moment,

Not for the sake of tomorrow"

This is the best line of this write.
Very inspiring indeed

Posted 9 Years Ago


Just live for this moment,

Not for the sake of tomorrow

Just live for these dreams today,

As they will no longer be there with you after this dawn

And then, you need not them from someone to borrow.


Beautiful lines ^_^

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very much inspiring.
Nice but I didn't got the usage of the pic with it :(
But yeah! the flow is nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked the optimism of the write.
Quite unique and new!

Posted 9 Years Ago


"I just lived this moment,

Where I gave my life just to live again.

And thanked God for removing this pain.

For giving me nothing I wanted,

But everything I needed..



So, for this smile, for this joy, this laughter and shine

I again wanna live for this moment..

Oh! Just live for this moment..

Just live for this moment.

As it won't be there tomorrow.

As it won't be there tomorrow "-

I just loved these lines very very much. This poem is quite different from your other works as it describes the positive aspect of life.
its a nice piece overall..


!!..Love..!!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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