When I met my Love..Again

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When I met my love AGAIN….

 

I still remember the times…..

When I used to write songs without any rhymes….

I still remember those days….

When I always used to lie awake…..

Oh! That was the time when I was in LOVE…

Truly madly and deeply with her….

I don’t know why….

But I was unable to tell her…

How much I love her…

May be I was afraid from her refusal…

Or the reason may be something else…..

That entire year I tried so hard….

To tell her what’s going inside my heart…

But days passed by,

And departed both of us……away…

And we both left alone….so alone…..

And I only said to her

-"I think so….we’ll never gonna meet again"

 

Years came and years gone…

And I decided to walk along….

Someone please!!! Save me from the future…

And take me back in time….

For words they have no meaning,

Without her in my life…..

As now, Iam looking for a reason just to smile once again….

With every changing season,

This pain I can’t explain…..

 

After some years, I got a mail…..

Reading about the reunion of all old friends…

After reading the words….

A thousand memories came through my mind…

And I decided to attend it for all the lost gains…

 

And finally, that day came….

When I was searching everywhere her face…

And then her eyes met mine…..

Brought some memories of our lives…

 

She was so changed…..

Her voice was faded …

But her face was just the same…

And I found that she was no longer the person,

From whom I was once so afraid of….

But she was also not the one…Whom I once loved….

Time unfolded the relationship of ours…..

I tried a lot to chase that girl but she was lost.….

She was lost somewhere along in this world’s bitterness….

But still we managed to talk….and talk…..

And found that even Iam no longer the kind of person that I once used to have…..…

So, I won’t blame her…as the fault is all mine…

 

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And today……Whenever I saw her….

I only search for a best friend….

So…when I met my love again, I found my best friend….

I met my love again…

And found a best friend…..

And for all those who used to say that love can never ever be converted into friendship…..

They were all wrong…

As mine for her…just did…

:)

 

 

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

I like the story in this. Relationships change overtime but few of us are brave enough to accept this truth.
This is a very honest expression of those feelings.
I appreciate your sincerity.

There are some grammatical errors in this one. A quick check will fix that.
Other than that, this is a brilliant read.

[Vaishali..^_^]

this is so sweet...and nice....!so beautiful..!

[Karl]

Oh! This is so beautiful

[Together]

Love ending in friendship, Very different idea but so honest and true!

[Roxy]

Oh! This is so beautiful ..I'm moved.

[Golden]

This is a very rare case when love changes into friendship. But, still it gives a sense of pain in both the sides according to me.

[Blue Rose]

Yes, I agree ..its a beautiful write.
Love turning into friendship which is really a very rare thing to happen.
I really enjoyed it!

[Blackbeats]

Changing relationship with time.


And for all those who used to say that love can never ever be converted into friendship�..

They were all wrong�

As mine for her�just did�

Nice!

[Innocent]

This is really a very rare piece since when we talk about break ups we usually finds a remorse feel of anger and rage but this one is really different and talks about how a relationship can change and the way time qualifies everything..really everything!

[RareRed]

Thank you for entering this in the "Past the Heartache" contest. This is a great piece, it puts a very new twist on the whole "Getting past the Heartbreak" idea. You normally think of the hurt and then moving on or the anger that's felt. But you don't see the "We've grown up, we've changed, we're not lovers anylonger but we can be best friends" idea. I love that you brought that out!

[!!..Love..!!]

This entire piece is very well written and explained. I simply loved the way you have described you've described the entire scene. I mean this is much of a graphical poem and who have written it very very well..
The reunion has also been very well explained in a very poetic manner.

"And today��Whenever I saw her�.

I only search for a best friend�.

So�when I met my love again, I found my best friend�.

I met my love again�

And found a best friend�..

And for all those who used to say that love can never ever be converted into friendship�..

They were all wrong�

As mine for her�just did�"

SUch a great ending, which is so true and with which anyone can relate to.!
too good.