Syllabus count: 5-7-5

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I welcome all sorts of suggestions on it… As such I guess the ending is nice! But starting line isn’t going well with it…
What’s your take? :D



(Special thanks to Caffeine for her help :) )

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Dear Bhavya, This is a great haiku. I have read many haikus till date and this is one of the bests in them. I loved the last line the most which symbolizes that there is always a new beginning after an end, which is really very inspiring. Literally also it is just perfect with the syllabus count and presentation is outstanding like always. Great job Bhavya and I'm looking forward for you to write more beautiful haikus like this

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