My first letter to you...

My first letter to you...

A Chapter by Bhavya Kaushik
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 My First Letter To You…

 

 

 

 

 

My Immortal,

 

Much before even we met, I knew you existed in a different world. Somewhere unseen you used to visit my dreams at every night. Soon you came into my life and I realized that you were the one, the only one for me. You entered in my life and changed every part of it. When we fall in love everyone was surprised to witness the union of two different souls into one. They were finding it hard to believe that two so incomplete and dissimilar humans could ever unite in such a way that the existence of one could make the other person complete in every sense as if the creator himself wanted them to be together for always. But they were wrong; the creator wanted us to be together but not for always. He had some different plans for us than we had for ourselves. We both were so in love with each other that everything was appearing like a dream and we were finding it hard to open our eyes again. But just like any other dream, ours also soon came to an end and became a nightmare of the past…

 

It’s been two years now from your death and you still visit my dreams in that same way as you used to visit before. I did a lot of different things in these past two years, I changed the direction of my life, I made a lot of friends, I went to every place to run away from our memories and I tried to do everything that was possible to forget you. But I soon realized that the more I try to forget you, the more I fall in love with you. People say that we can fall in love only once but they are wrong …because every time whenever I listen to your voice or see your photograph, I fall in love with you over and over again…

 

 My life was like a song lyric searching for its music. When you entered in my life you gave it a perfect symphony and made the world to dance upon the melody of our love. But as soon as you left me, the lyrics were changed and the symphony of your absence became its true music for the world to cry upon…

 

This is the first letter which I’m writing to you after the day when you left me from this physical world. But surely, this isn’t the last one. It is not the end of our journey but the beginning of a new one. You are my eternal, my immortal and will always continue living in this world through me, with me and for me. My every heartbeat is your voice and this entire world is the reflection of your sight into mine…

 

This letter is not to say goodbye to you my love but to thank you for coming in my life. To thank you for loving me without any expectations, to thank you for receiving my love and holding it inside of your heart till your last breath, and most importantly I thank you for educating me what love is all about…

 

I love you…

 

Yours,

B.





© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik



Author's Note

Bhavya Kaushik
I wrote this in less than even 10 minutes...may be because I was not even required to think anything while writing this....It came right from the heart :)

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This is such a powerful piece of writing. It teaches several lessons about love and also, several lessons about losing it.
"People say that we can fall in love only once but they are wrong because every time whenever I listen to your voice or see your photograph, I fall in love with you over and over again"
Those lines are so beautiful because they are SO TRUE! You placed a fact into your own example for your audience. It takes true compassion and strength to write from the heart, and i see that in every line. Lovely right, hope to read more soon.

-Austin

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Ya..dil se aaya hua h

Posted 5 Years Ago


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so intenseful and made me think of those around me. You are a very powerful writer.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is one of the most beautiful things that I've read.
It's a kind of love I have yet to experience but I can still feel the power of it...

Its one of those pieces where every line demonstrates the power of it.
From my place, I can only marvel at how well you've done. Great work. I like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I love it. It is filled with hope, faith, meaning, and gives the feeling of people in love on two different planes of life. It lives and breathes. The time it took to write it, does not mean anything to me, but I love the quality of the writing and the story you tell.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It just made me go aaaaaaww.. :'(
I feel like crying.. u write great from your heart.. every word in your letter is a feeling revealed..
hats off..

Posted 7 Years Ago


amazing,it gives your heart that sweet sad feeling.good work

Posted 7 Years Ago


You had me in the opening but when I read the whole letter
these lines .. got my soul
My life was like a song lyric searching for its music. When you entered in my life you gave it a perfect symphony and made the world to dance upon the melody of our love. But as soon as you left me, the lyrics were changed and the symphony of your absence became its true music for the world to cry upon…

what a way of expressing your soul...and your love.. My God. are you an angel?
I am speechless....just amazed by your beauty.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very nicde peice. I really loved the way you wrote it. I really feel all the enotion.
Great write, thanks for entering, good luck =]

Posted 7 Years Ago


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such an intense, powerful and beautifully tragic piece of writing...such a unique masterpiece as it came directly from within your soul...this is immensely personal yet so universal in its appeal, made my heart break and tears flood...tries to fathom a love that is immortal, divine and mystical, and finds its proper place in Eternity! Thanks a lot for sharing..may the Almighty always bless you with this unique power to find divinity in a mundane loss, to find a true 'Catharsis' in despair and pining. GOD BLESS YOU!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Now i know... The theme of "loss"... It just never occurred to me that the way of "losing" her was the most painful one... *sighs*

I cried... while reading this. I cried for the etarnal beauty of your words which I am sure vibrates with the same tune of her symphony... I heard the music and the lyrics... I cried for you.

Best of our work comes when we are honest.. The best and greatest pieces of art are almost always the ones which are based on something REAL, someone REAL... And that is what i love the most about your style.

She was and is not only your music... she is also your inspiration. She still is...

Huh, everything has a reason, dont they?

Posted 7 Years Ago


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