Already Gone

Already Gone

A Chapter by Bhavya Kaushik

 

 †The Evanescent screams†

 

 

 

 

† Already Gone  

 

 

 

There is no point of staring at each other everyday,

 

When we both know that things are not working out in our way.

 

So I make it easy for you and will leave happily,

 

As there are no reasons left for you to make me stay.

 

 

 

 

Our love can not keep this relationship alive anymore,

 

So I’m walking outside forever from our front door.

 

With my black backpack bursting with memories,

 

I went out of this room and your life forever.

 

 

 

 

I’m already gone from your life much before anything commence,

 

Gone forever for you to rest in stillness.

 

As I love you enough to let you go, but can you…?

 

So I’m already gone… I’m already gone…gone forever.

 

 




© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik



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This poem reflect your previous ones in this book and is the reason for your silent screams and loneliness.
It is beautifully written and I appreciate the way you decided to end the relationship .. i would never have the guts ... But still ..
I loved the last line ... "So I'm already gone I'm already gonegone forever." which i find sad in a way.
Nice write.

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Already Gone......... Gone Forever. Although the poem becomes very compassionate and beautiful....... but may I ask why?

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So tragic... but beautiful as well. There is a lot of pain throughout this, but I don't believe the majority is coming from you. It's as if you've convinced yourself it is for the best and took HER by surprise. Maybe you've already accepted the fact that she is gone, while she is still hanging on. Either way, I really like this one. Keep up the good writes.. love reading your work!

-Austin

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now i see... isnt it always love..

"Love, man's greater power and also his greatest weakness"

this one was more simple than the other three... kinda raw but believe me in a good way.. and MAN! the way you express things drive me crazy! i would pay you to teach me how to do that!

i loved the picture.. very nice. another great job...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This poem reflect your previous ones in this book and is the reason for your silent screams and loneliness.
It is beautifully written and I appreciate the way you decided to end the relationship .. i would never have the guts ... But still ..
I loved the last line ... "So I'm already gone I'm already gonegone forever." which i find sad in a way.
Nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This one tugs on the heart, I like this alot
Cool flower there, l ike that! Very well written write!

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