Waiting for you

Waiting for you

A Chapter by Bhavya Kaushik

 

 †The Evanescent screams†

 

 

† Waiting for you  

 

 

I still spend my entire evenings waiting for you,

 

While sitting at the front porch for hours.

 

With my eyes staring at the distant line of horizon,

 

I remember about you and nothing else.

 

 

 

The passage of each and every day,

 

Makes your absence more and more certain.

 

But it still won’t stop me waiting for you,

 

Even though it gives me inevitable pain.

 

 

 

There are also chances for you to not come back,

 

That all I once had is all I’m going to have.

 

But with my heart stopped and veins chocked,

 

I will keep on waiting for you always.

 

 

 

 

 




© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik



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"That all I once had is all I am going to have."

The strongest line in the poem... Very beautiful again, in a aching way... Theme of "loss" again..

Excellent. I like it even tho ur poems are sad, they usually have faint hope in it... The lightest voice whispering from a side "It'll all be alright...not yet, but one day"

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I forgot the time I did exactly what you described in this poem.. and the waiting goes on forever.. I am in pain and in tears ... about your work of poetry.. ANgel

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"That all I once had is all I am going to have."

The strongest line in the poem... Very beautiful again, in a aching way... Theme of "loss" again..

Excellent. I like it even tho ur poems are sad, they usually have faint hope in it... The lightest voice whispering from a side "It'll all be alright...not yet, but one day"

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That all I once had is all I am going to have. Love this line.......... wonderful expression, sad but still hopeful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Bhavya Kaushik
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