I just imagined you

I just imagined you

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik

There you are now, finally walking towards me,

Creating glitters in my eyes, and a smile on my face.


I hugged you tightly to acknowledge your presence,


To never let you go, to cherish your sweetest grace.





Your fingertips gently touched my drenched skin,


And with this touch, you captivated every part of me.


I cried with joy, for it was like my dream coming true,


When you took my hand and started to dance with me.





Suddenly a cold wind came and sucked all the sanity in me.


I opened my eyes with lack of desire into this hard reality.


Your touch, your voice, your smell was nothing but my imagination.


To keep myself alive, sometimes I have to live with this deception.



...

© 2011 Bhavya Kaushik



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Well penned Bhavya. God bless :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


This one is so heartbreaking to read. It brings back a flood of emotion that lays beneath the surface. Yes, the title is eye catching. Excellent!! 💔

Posted 3 Years Ago


amazing!!!! this is such a good piece of poetry... very well written! XD

Posted 3 Years Ago


Isn't imagination wonderful? Well written piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Oh this is so very sad and moving. The pain which accompanies reality's rude awakening sometimes gets overwhelming and almost unbearable.

This was very well written by the way, the joy at the start made the pathetic drop into utter loneliness even more bruising. Your diction and structure are just great.
Thanks so very much for sharing. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


You have beautifully described the feeling one has to face when he wishes for something he would probably never have. Loved the depth. hats off.. ;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


This just sums up the sadness one feels when a lover dies. It was so moving. The contrast of the joy and happiness of the first two verses with the desolation of the last verse is perfect.

Posted 4 Years Ago


i loved it so much....very involving and very attractive...your lines are magnetic....love it:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


I just love your title and the way you've described;-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Thats a great write! I loved the way the last stanza portrays the reluctance to let go of the sweet imagination...

Posted 4 Years Ago



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