I just imagined you

I just imagined you

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik

There you are now, finally walking towards me,

Creating glitters in my eyes, and a smile on my face.


I hugged you tightly to acknowledge your presence,


To never let you go, to cherish your sweetest grace.





Your fingertips gently touched my drenched skin,


And with this touch, you captivated every part of me.


I cried with joy, for it was like my dream coming true,


When you took my hand and started to dance with me.





Suddenly a cold wind came and sucked all the sanity in me.


I opened my eyes with lack of desire into this hard reality.


Your touch, your voice, your smell was nothing but my imagination.


To keep myself alive, sometimes I have to live with this deception.



...

© 2011 Bhavya Kaushik


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Thats a great write! I loved the way the last stanza portrays the reluctance to let go of the sweet imagination...

Posted 11 Years Ago


So true

Posted 11 Years Ago


Reminds me of La Belle Dame Sans Merci in a way.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love it. I love how the last four lines turn the poem. I appreciate writing like this. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Bhavya Kaushik

11 Years Ago

Thank you, means a lot :)
simple words, clear expressions !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Bhavya Kaushik

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Bhavya Kaushik

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
VERY EXPRESSIVE POEM!!! I LIKE IT...!!!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Bhavya Kaushik

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
lovely piece of write...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Mia
Wow! It is such a beautiful poem, I just want to read it and reread and read it some more! Incredible!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Bhavya Kaushik

11 Years Ago

Aw! Thank you :)
true and amazingly crafted!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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