To Life Again?

To Life Again?

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik
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A Chōka, with the syllabus count of 5-7 5-7 5-7 5-7-7.

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With each drop of rain

That falls on my arid skin.

My body shivers,

More than ever in this cold.

I feel numb and stun,

Empty like a haunted crypt.

Without sensation,

I beg for an easy death

To rest in peace forever.




© 2013 Bhavya Kaushik



Author's Note

Bhavya Kaushik
Chōka consists of 5-7 sound units phrases repeated at least twice, and concludes with a 5-7-7 ending. This writing has a syllabus count of 5-7 5-7 5-7 5-7-7 :)

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This is when I call when ''the soul dies'' we may be walking with our body but we are dead inside. we can not wait for the body death that it's seems coming too slowly ... very deep and beautiful written.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Too intense I liked it. A strong words of feeling. Truly aspiring.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Death... perhaps the ultimate destination of human ...
too deep... too intense...
i like the way of representation..
This style sounds good and captivating ...
Sir, I'll definitely be glad if you check out for my writings and provide some suggestions.
I want to write novels...
I do have a co writer too.
We're on our way to that...
And we'll be lucky to have your support...
Thanks a lot...
Anindita

Posted 11 Months Ago


These are not just some lines but there is indeed a deep meaning hidden behind it. .
I especially liked the last line- I beg for an easy death to rest in peace forever...
Keep on writing...

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is a very deep piece, like lucid dreaming i could almost picture the moment.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Great piece of writing friend.. I enjoyed..

Posted 2 Years Ago


good work dear..
it was deep and beautiful..
keep it up:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow! Deep and beautiful! Great work, Bhavya Kaushik!

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is really nice, those words seem to reflect myself. I really like it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vividly captivating the virtualy empire you do let the people know the different form of style employed in writing. Specially counting exact sound syllabes studding them in their proper place with a beautiful message is really time consuming art. Thank keep it with your shivering hands.....
Have a nice day!

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on January 11, 2012
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