Scars

Scars

A Poem by Brook Hughes

Broken hearts
Unhealed scars
leaving me in little parts
No more feeling
numbness left behind
Stomach no longer intertwined
Strength remained 
Power gained
My heat is beating once again
My life I own
Im better off alone.

© 2012 Brook Hughes


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I'm wondering how it really is better to be alone. Alone is so final sounding. This is an extremely deep thoughtful piece. "Pondering thinker" as I like to call this type. They have us examine what we this is best vs. what it really is...make sense? I can feel an undertone of hope though...can't pinpoint it but it just flits through my mind as I read this poem..and I've read it 3 times. Just like your friend said, "Just keep your head up" :) You look down and that is where you'll end up...look straight and level because you ARE a person just like everybody else :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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this is very interesting.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm wondering how it really is better to be alone. Alone is so final sounding. This is an extremely deep thoughtful piece. "Pondering thinker" as I like to call this type. They have us examine what we this is best vs. what it really is...make sense? I can feel an undertone of hope though...can't pinpoint it but it just flits through my mind as I read this poem..and I've read it 3 times. Just like your friend said, "Just keep your head up" :) You look down and that is where you'll end up...look straight and level because you ARE a person just like everybody else :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This sounds ALOT like me, I can totally relate to this poem, I know how you feel, Brook, just keep your head up (:

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Brook Hughes
Brook Hughes

Viroqua, WI



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Hi:) So... my name is Brook Hughes. I have 2 middle names Ashley and Ann. I live in good old Wisconsin. My social security number is 33562. LMFAO!!!!! jk jk. Anyways i love animals.... I would like t.. more..

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