Together

ONE MAN'S WOMAN AND ONE WOMAN'S MAN . MAY BE IT IS CONVENTIONAL BUT I BELIEVE IN IT.

Reason makes man

Compassion makes woman

To be one woman man

And one man woman

It demands commitment

commitment that kills lust

dedication for the best

And together for the rest

If a woman/man of your insight

Has not found yet, Search for the best

Age may weaken body

But time boosts nobility

Distance among bodies

Cause nearness of souls

When I reach at your palace

Oh angel in my dreams

Bless me with the wisdom

Wisdom that overcomes knowledge.

Reviews

[Keenan.Ellis]

Hey, I really enjoyed this. I always found poet's penchant for complicated words for the sake of complicated words to be obnoxious, and posturing. Here, you've created a succinct, and relateable poem in language that Hemingway would be proud of. Good job, keep writing.

[SUGATA M]

You write exactly the way you comprehend, no hanky-panky in between, no addition of emotional or intellectual spices, like batting of a daring hard-hitter on a flat pitch. Loving your works..........will read

[Mary Christabel George]

This is a beautiful piece of writing..
It tells how men & women are wired.
What kind of relationship they share.
I enjoyed reading it.

[Luna]

Nice, i liked the flow in this poem. Well done.And it's meaningful too (a second well done) Plus it rhymes (a third well done) . Okay I think you have out done yourself LOL. Nice read i enjoyed it :)

[Anjali]

Whoa, an amazing way to put up the topic of commitment for:
1. One man woman
2. One woman man
Such beautifully crafted piece of work describing the feminine and masculine nature and how to be together.

Loved reading your work!

[KTizzle]

I liked how you showed what happens when the balance of masculine and feminine energies are disrupted.

Thanks for sharing!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"Bless me with the wisdom
Wisdom that overcomes knowledge."
Wisdom is needed. I learn to understand my Grandfather words of wisdom and I live by them now. Thank you Bibin for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

I relay enjoyed reading this one..

[bibin Sebastian]

thanks a lot

[sharmila]

it's a really good way to convey lessons like this you're amazing