WHAT IF

What if I was there to run my fingers through your hair,what if every moment of the day,you could feel how much I care.What if I could stop time,and it was just you and I,would that be something you would want,would you ever question why.

 

What if my every breath was against your face,would that be enough,to make your heart race.What if every tear you cried,was a drop of love,like raindrops that fall,from the skies above.What if every night you made me scream your name,and every morning when we wake,I make you do the same.What if all these things are just a sure sign,that your heart is where it belongs,wrapped right around mine.

 

What if I sent a message on a beautiful white dove,and told you I wait for you,with a heart full of love.What if all these what ifs were a reality,then there would be no what ifs,cause you'd be right here with me.

Reviews

[RahmaChio]

This is deep! great job!!

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

Heartfelt writing... Nice going...keep good work on

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"What if every tear you cried,was a drop of love,like raindrops that fall,from the skies above."

I liked these lines a lot! This is a beautiful piece, I must say. The "what ifs' in our lives are what make us keep on hoping..
Nicely penned :)

[Windy]

OMG, you just keep getting better. If my husband wrote more like this, well I'll leave that alone. LOL anyway... I like how you added in all the what if's, yet they were almost more like reality than a question (from reading your writing). I think my most favorite part was "What if all these things were just a sure sign, that your heart is where it belongs, wrapped right around mine." Absolutly beautiful and sooooooo romantic. Maybe you should think about writing a romance novel, I'd read it!! Great job again my friend, we've missed you. ;)