SPLASH!

MY FIRST ATEMPT AT A HAIKU.

LOVE INVADES MY HEART

FILLS ME FULL OF EMOTION

THEN EXPLODES ON YOU

Reviews

[Manu]

Very nice Haiku. I really enjoyed reading this. Well written

[Windy]

Honestly, I know nothing about writing Haiku's, but have read many and this is a really good one, you say so much with so few words. Amazing. Well done as usual. ;)

[Succubi]

lovely haiku
a great use of seventeen sylables
nice piece of work =)

[closed account]

very lovely Haiku!! very nice!!! I love the last line... *Then explodes on you* great ending!!