Into The Sky........

Into The Sky........

A Poem by Poeticme
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a love poem.....

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The clouds in the sky form a vision of her. And as they float by, it becomes a blurr.

Where did she go, where could she be; only if my heart had eyes, then maybe it could see.

See that she’s here, walking by my side. And I scream out my love, for that I don’t hide

 My eyes are wide open, as I look back at the sky, and I ask the lord above, to tell me why

  Why did you send an angel, to capture my heart, all the way to the center, the most important part?

I watch for clouds, to show me her face, and they shower me with rain, to take her place

 


© 2017 Poeticme



Author's Note

Poeticme
flying high in love....

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heartfelt and beautifully written.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Poeticme

3 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping in and reading my piece, I appreciate it

Poeticme
Gypsy Dreamer

3 Months Ago

You're welcome.
Just beautiful. Really beautiful. The rhyme and rhythm of this poem is perfect, it all flows together so well. This is one of those poems you just have to read over and over again to admire it's beauty. Wonderful job, i absolutely loved it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Poeticme

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind and lovely words on this piece. Yes I am quite the hopeless romantic, feel f.. read more
Dude, this was something else. First off, I love the color thing youve got going on, that was awesome and then the imagery it painted, bravo on this man

Posted 6 Months Ago


Poeticme

6 Months Ago

Appreciate that bro,..yeah I get lost in the moment when I'm in my zone. A love poet I am, glad you .. read more
Moving poetry that really touched me! Beautifully penned ... :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Poeticme

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words...glad my poetry moved you my lady

Poeticme
"I watch for clouds, to show me her face, and they shower me with rain, to take her place"

This line really captured my heart!
I loved the feel this piece creates in the reader. Nicely penned 👍



Posted 6 Months Ago


There is a soft, dreamy like feel to your words...almost as if floating - or as you said, flying high in love. Stunning poetry :) Julie

Posted 7 Months Ago


this is sweet and full of love - nice to read and nice to imagine it being such a free and happy thing :) Good word use. Made me smile and say - that's nice

Posted 3 Years Ago


You created beautiful imagery, it was soft, delicate and almost quiet. Rhyming was outstanding and it flows really well. Nicely done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


What a romantic softee! It sounds like you've got it bad---ah, but that's how we are. Nice imagery and comparisons.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awe, so passionate and soulfull. I love how you pray for the rain to wash down on you. Almost like it's making you feel her presence. Lovely piece, brother. Glad to see you writing again. I miss you.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on January 21, 2009
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I have been writing poetry for years,I have a great imagination,well as all knows that is a must for a poetic soul.My poetry comes from my heart,cannot help that fact.I am really starting to settle in.. more..

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