prism

rays of light
stream like water
incandescent ignition in interior space
puddles of life
reflect light
life is internal
eternal

Reviews

[Muse]

Stunning. You mirror the internal within the eternal. This strikes me on a very deep and personal level, and so it deserves a moment of respect and self-reflection.

[SoulSplatter]

I love simplicity that makes me think. This is beautiful. I can relate to this in a big way as I have been pondering about just how external the world really is. Great write, thank you for sharing!

[Rita L. Sev]

Simple wording, lovely imagery - great poetry!

[Relic]

Well said, like it.

[Helene K. S. Jensen]

I love the simplicity of the poem. Great choise of words and aestheticly clean as well. Very sutable for the subject and fits the writing.

[De 'Anthony Subban II]

i love your poem

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:: exquisite poetry... you're an expert in precision... i especially loved "incandescent ignition in interior space"... amazing alliteration and imagery...