Whatever you say babe

Whatever you say babe

A Poem by bitstring
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After seeing a beautifull lady, who could of been mine - but i missed the chance.

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'Twas blissfull evening, warm and nice

when lady luck had rolled its dice
and summoned up without a warning
a stunning gal, with looks so blinding.

To feel lucky, was a common sense
but not as easy to comprehense
for she was a spirit, free and wild
and to my will she won't oblige.


Though I won't try, so truth be sour
but i would kill for such an hour
where she would be in front of me
sitting under a maple tree.


Bending over to my ear
to tell me  what i want to hear
and then her voice beggins to fade
saying „whatever you say, babe“.

© 2012 bitstring


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I love the rhymes, this was a really good poem. Sweet and cute and.. all other good words haha. I enjoyed reading it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice piece and great touch. its soft and minimal.
Easy read!

Globy
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Added on July 14, 2012
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Tags: love, dreams, imagination

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bitstring
bitstring

Osijek, Slavonia, Croatia



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