I Hear the Music...

A sonnet

I hear the music when I'm with you.  
Each time the melody sings anew,
Soon the golden notes of the band
Carries me away to another land.
 
As my imagination leaves me speechless,
The orchestra fades into the darkness.
When I remember the feel of your arms,
Soon I am captivated by your charms.  

I hear the music when we're together.
The melody grows for our pleasure,
I soar again, singing sheer bliss.  
As we share another sweet kiss.
 
The strings of the violin I hear
Magically every time you are near.

Author's Note

My fiance really loves music, so I wanted to write a piece that included music.

Reviews

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

another well written and well thought out work. great imagery. thanks for sharing

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Ooh, this is beautiful. You did an amazing job on this and it's just fantastic. Great work!!!

Heather

[Sarah]

Aw, this was really romantic! Great job with the rhyme! (:

[Adela Muresan]

Magnificent ending :).

Nice job.

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, this is truly beautiful! And I really love it. Good luck, I know you got my vote.

jkb

[Robert Luna]

I really love the way you write and capture such a raw energy among your words. You tell a tale so vividly that anyone that reads your words is able to see them and feel them other than just read them. They do not remain just laying upon a page they take a life of their own. It is always a pleasure to read your words.


Well Done!!!!!

[Cece]

i really love music
it is always my therapy
i listen to music as i write

this "I hear the music"
suggests music everywhere
besides from my ipod

muuah is music as well as bliss
i like the style so much
think i use similar before

[Moonlit-Blues]

This is mellow and beautifully written! Lovely rhyme, the poem's essence has charmed the reader, well... at least for me. Loved it. =)

[Brooke_Alyse]

That feeling of connection between music of soul
is nothing we cannot ignore and you put it into words that keep it alive.
very well done.

[forfila]

He is a lucky man,, I needn't write more in this review for you to know how much I adore this

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