EVERYDAY

What is 'Everyday' - To a child - as he grows up, as he thinks far in time... covering thoughts from the childhood to the teenhood and finally when he matures enough to think of the final departure!

Everyday, I like to dream

To fly the sky n see the stream

Everyday, I like to feel

Cool breeze, its power to heel

 

Everyday, I want to smell

Droplets of Dew, on the white petal, that fell

Everyday, I want to ring

Bell at the old temple wing

 

Everyday, I love to gaze

Squirrels chattering at the trees’ maze

Everyday, I hope to see

The beautiful sun with the golden glee

 

Everyday, I wait till its night

To catch the firefly with my sight

Everyday, I wish it rains

And wash away all that pains

 

Everyday, I love to go

With my Mom, to the forest below

And pluck the flowers for the market sale

Living each moment with the moist morning gale

 

Everyday, I love to play

With the girl at the hut made of clay

And eat together the sweet colourful pie

With the girl who’s a little too shy

 

Everyday, I want to wish

Goodness at the heart for all thee

Everyday, I wish to see

Blossom into the best of me

 

Everyday, I wish I play

Losing the fact of the reality of clay

And, finally erasing the low n the high,

I wish peace when I Die

 

Nayan....................

11:23 AM IST, Friday

29^th January 29, 2010

Reviews

[bryandc15]

powerful poem..... Live life as it is..... be happy:)

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This is so wonderful, I really enjoyed this write.
Very talented

[Lorraine]

Although it's a pretty simple poem, I like the idea of finding joy in ordinary things. It just shows a childlike attitude and innocence. The repetitions wasn't overly done, as they still impact until the very end.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[maryjaneuy]

Very nice poem!!! I like the positivity in here. I love to read very happy or any positive poems. Hope I can read more from you! keep it up! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Even us old people like to play. A excellent poem. Flow and words made poem fun to read. We must have fun in life or death may look very good.
Coyote

[Ali_Avery~7]

It is interesting that a child can find joy everyday in the simple things in life, and you capture that very well in this writing. As the child matures, it changes it's point of view, "I wish peace when I Die." nice pondering :)

- PG

[Cassandra D.]

Very nice descriptions.
The ending gave me a bit of chills down my spine...
"I wish peace when I Die..."