Quite a Gentle Soul

We all know one I'm sure

Flooding my porous but

Quite impressionable life

Are streams of your gracious and

Quite insatiable ways.

 

It has been said

 

‘Many waters cannot quench love’

 

Even when such love itself

Plunges deep, down into raging storms

Propelling fast, through relentless tides

Dragging not carrying -

As a Saviour -

A flagging life to softer plains,

 

I know pains, quite unpalatable

Occupy the whole

But as I breathe, quite undeservedly

I gasp,

Thankyou

Gentle soul x

Reviews

[Grey]

This is more than palatable, it's easy to read because the the beauty of the flow, the words and the depth of understanding of the subject. Magnifique!

[P.J.]

anything more than palatable is good..thankyou for reading

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

How precious those who love us with gentleness, something that seems a vanishing art sometimes. Their quite ways strong as currents pulling us past sadness, self-hatred, destruction and folly - where would we be without them. Absolutely beautiful!

[P.J.]

so true and thankyou for reviewing this

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

It's beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem . The gentle flow of word are needed. Such hope and kindness in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[P.J.]

thankyou sir, hope you are well

[Joel A Doetsch]

This is very passionate and impactful. Good stuff.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You make me want for more...for an ending to never be.

[Satire69]

awe, I liked this. :D

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Smooth, refreshingly affectionate and truly an enjoyable read.

[The Cobra Lounge]

You write with elegance.

Honestly I read so much stuff on WC...and only a select few seem to have finessed the art of graceful penning. Even the presentation of your work is carefully planned and delivered. Beautiful work my friend.

[The White Wolf]

Yes, we all know one, and they are truly a gift to anyone who is blessed enough to have them near. This is a beautiful thought to me today and one that I will be thinking about for some time to come. Thank you very much for sharing it.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Lifted up, and brought to softer plains .. salvation despite the self .. Thank you seems so little, for those that gave so much .. .. Touches deeply .. A Wonderful write ..

Jasmine ..