Infected

Infected

A Poem by Maddox

Infected
Every minute of
everyday.
Thoughts of you
slow me down
make it hard to see
anything else.
Trust me,
I've tried.
Why do you do this to me?
What makes you so
special?
I see you
watching me
when I pass by.
I wish you that you would just say
Hi.
I don't think you ever have,
for all the times that we've talked.
See! 
Even now, your love
it's a virus
you just don't know it yet.

© 2012 Maddox


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Understanding the over all theme, the word play and flow is nice and cool.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awesome very enjoyable to read and understandable. Good write. Keep it up~!

Posted 11 Years Ago


clever. i like how you described that thinking about the person slows you down. hidden message is cool. nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


BLOWN AWAY this was amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this poem because I can totally relate to it. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Okay, so i was reading submissions to my poetry contest and came across this piece and was blown away by the great talent you had. Beautifully written. Legit the best poem in the whole contest :) Amazing
-Emmy

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poem in a poem. well done.
touching in the least mushy sort of way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow good job! very inteesting. you got a talent!

Posted 12 Years Ago


It was very interesing. I liked it alot. Nice poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Damn this is good really caught my attention was very interesting nice job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Maddox
Maddox

Columbus, OH



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