why?

why?

A Poem by The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family
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I always say Love is not of the weak but the strong, the ones who are not scared to show some passion are the STRONGEST of us all... but love still sucks

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you said you'd love me foever

why would you say that if you didnt mean it?

or when you held my hand and looked me in the eyes

You swore it god damn it!

You swore to never leave me!

You f*****g liar

You're a f*****g liar!!!

When you're done tearing me apart

take out a knife and dig out my heart

when i can't go on i'll put up my fist anyways

and say get the f**k back get the f**k back

i don't need you!!!

© 2008 The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family


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The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family
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very raw, honest, and fierce and sad...only one metaphor and image, and it's very simply rendered, but to great effect. strongly written, good stuff.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family
The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family

Bastrop, TX



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I'm a poet... well not so much anymore. Most of my poems stemmed from relationship troubles but thats of the past. Now my baby and my hubby are my life. But i still LOVE LOVE LOVE music, as does hu.. more..

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