love?

Endless palpitation of my heart

When you are near

It is LOVE.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that IS Love for sure...the heart reacts without our control...

and love does its own thing.

[Yahallo]

A clever piece with great catchy rhyme!

[Lorry]

Dizziness, palpitations and shortness of breath. Has anyone else noticed that love and carbon monoxide poisoning have the same symptoms :)
Love how much of a statement you made in so few words. Excellent.

[wordman]

it sounds like love to me

[Jimmy Yetts]

Ruling out a panic attack, this certainly indicates one strong reaction.
If you say it's love, who am I to argue with you?
Who's more of an expert on you than you?
A piece with which almost everyone can relate.

[sette]

thanks jimmy i was just challenged by 12 words.

[poetgurl]

such a sweet adorable write

[sette]

thanks again jane

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Passions heartbeat summed poetically in brevity wow. Thumbs up.

U may read my poems too, but comment only on the latest Pleez.

[sette]

thanks for the wonderful comment