darkness

darkness

A Poem by sette




In moments of solitude,

I feel darkness enveloping around me.

Too many questions remained unanswered.

What has been life to me?


© 2018 sette



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Questions we ask ourselves in the darkest moments of our lives, bring the greatest light. I love your poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


sette

3 Months Ago

thank you wesley for the appreciation and wonderful review
Long and dark night where we can't sleep. The mind can wander and make us loco. I do understand this poem. I must meditate to sleep. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


sette

3 Months Ago

thanks again john
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
This totally reminds me of Shel Silverstein, because of how it is structured and its length but with a darker theme. I love it! After reading a couple of times it becomes more relatable but the first time it was just very impactful and thought-provoking.

Posted 3 Months Ago


sette

3 Months Ago

thanks for the wonderful review ellen i really learned a lot.
Short with a strong impact on your words. well done

Posted 3 Months Ago


sette

3 Months Ago

thanks jane for the review
Short but full that's for sure.

Posted 3 Months Ago


sette

3 Months Ago

thanks diane for the wonderful review
Diane

3 Months Ago

Welcome. Wonderful poem wonderful review
sette

3 Months Ago

true very true
In that room of darkness if you turn on the light you will find you are not alone.in fact that room will be overcrowded.too many questions indeed...

Posted 3 Months Ago


sette

3 Months Ago

yes that is always the feeling thanks kc for the wonderful review
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RWE
A good question to ponder in the dark. It's healthy to take time for self-reflection. While some might find this poem a bit dark, it's the opposite to me. I love the candle image you paired with the poem. When I read this piece, I wondered... Is the writer the flame, or the person looking into it? It's light nonetheless.. hope. A good piece in few words.

Posted 3 Months Ago


sette

3 Months Ago

thanks robert for the appreciation

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