the search is over

the search is over

A Poem by sette
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can't upload the music video, the lyrics will do

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The Search Is Over

Survivor

How can I convince you what you see is real

Who am I to blame you for doubting what you feel

I was always reachin', you were just a girl I knew

I took for granted the friend I have in you

I was living for a dream,

Loving for a moment

Taking on the world,

That was just my style

Now I look into your eyes

I can see forever,

The search is over

You were with me all the while

Can we last forever, will we fall apart

At times it's so confusing, these questions of the heart

You followed me through changes, and patiently you'd wait

Till I came to my senses, through some miracle of fate

I was living for a dream,

Loving for a moment

Taking on the world,

That was just my style

Now I look into your eyes

I can see forever,

The search is over

You were with me all the while

Now…



from the song, here is my poem:


There were many times                                     

I keep asking myself

Is it really worth it,

the love I have for you?

 

How can I say to myself

what I feel for you

is real and powerful?

Never thought I could love like this.

 

From the start,

It was so easy to love you,

every trait that I want in a man.

I found in YOU.

 

Friendship has been one

strong foundation

to know all about you,

but I always set you aside.

 

Why?

because of him,

because of loving him strongly,

because of this uncontrollable emotion.

 

I have always thought

you were just a dream,

one day when I wake up,

everything will be gone.

 

God knows,

the search has been over

but I turned a blind eye,

a deaf ear

and an empty heart.

 

Now,

It is too late

to admit,

that you have captured my heart.


© 2018 sette


Author's Note

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This poem made me cry. Your words were heartfelt. Thank you for writing these feelings and emotions so eloquently.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

thank you and i hope i am there to wipe your tears, thanks very much for the appreciation
This is great!! The heart wants what the heart wants.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

totally true and there's nothing you can do thanks for the wonderful review
Wonderful- when the heart feels nothing can stop it- great words🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

thanks for the wonderful review
Love is trickery. When love is near. We do not appreciate. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry ands your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

hi friend thanks for the wonderful review. my muse is nowhere to be seen now so i will just keep on .. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Don't worry you shall track them down and you are welcome.
sette

6 Years Ago

it did come later
Don't know this musical group or the song, but thank you for including the lyrics so we can find the parallels you followed when writing your poem. I am happy to say that your poem is not a bit like the song, other than the general point shared by both. I like the way your poem tells a story with a bit of elusive writing in stanza 5 (who is this other "he"?) and the finality of the ending -- when it's too late & we're just too slow to see it. It's happened to me many times over the years! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

thanks for the appreciation my friend and the nice review and a big hugz to you for being wonderful .. read more
Survivor is one of my top 5 bands of all time so that your poem is inspired by one their songs is a great start... But I must say your poem stands on its own... Really great writing...
Sometimes we overlook what is right before our eyes until it is too late.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

totally true, i intend to write a poem about the song ever since the world begun if my muse is alrea.. read more
Last line of your poem is a heart-breaker.
Impressive post, S!

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

hahaha.. you can tell
Sounds serious to me...well it doesn't really because you could not upload the music, so let's say...it looks good to me..oh' well hope you know what I mean........N

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

i know what you mean my friend thanks for everything
Neville

6 Years Ago

phew, that's a relief....no room for misinterpretations here.......bless ya sete...

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