I Miss You

A Poem that I wrote for my mother.

                   My mom and I are slowly dying but deep inside I know she's crying

                     I miss her deeply and she knows, but who I am it never shows.

                    I am ashamed for what I've done, I only thought it would be fun.

                    I hurt her bad and I regret it, for what I've done she has had it.

                    We never talk but when we do I start to cry and she does too.

                   I wish I could go back in time, just to be with her for one last night.

                   I think of her both day and night, but I am scared of my might.

                    Depression is setting in but I won't let it take me again.

                     I sit and ponder what life's about, but I just have not found that out.

Reviews

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that was very sad...
but yet it i a well written poem ..keep it up
just one mistake in 5th line *too instead of *to

[ciara anders]

Thank you I will definitely fix that

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:) Keep it up