Fusion

Fusion

A Poem by BLitZeD

A satanic revolution/
 Demonic illusions/
 Popping bottles of deluded, an educed delusion in which/
Theirs a need to burn crucifix's/
 Tying nooses to necks for the next person to speak up and step in for the Constitution which/
 Has been thoroughly diluted, with water polluted by hate crimes that alluded prosecution/ 
Blurred the lines of black an white/
Caused confusion an interracial prostitution/
 Ironically resulting in the solution/

 //A new color of grey after the fusion//  

© 2015 BLitZeD


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This is good. I agree with AaronFreitas, it's creative. Perhaps a proofread, however, as there are a few grammar mistakes and a few words written incorrect. 'Tying nooses to necks for the next person to speak up and step in for the constitution which has been thoroughly diluted with water polluted by hate crimes...' < I love that part... it is so true and resembles society a lot. Keep up with the work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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my reviews may be coming in late, but by god! am enjoying your work, en i'll keeping reading

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very nice poem!
Keep it up!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Persecution based on race and religion is the mark of a coward. Hiding behind ideology to shield one's stupidity from being exposed is one of the lowest forms of human behavior out there. Different religions, so let's fight a war? C'mon! Thanks for shedding light on this topic. take care...dan

Posted 3 Years Ago


Good s**t man, I got something, just not for posting

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love it, very creative and powerful!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Your poems are very reminiscient of.. however I am not understanding the forward slashes.. the words on though I do kapish their intended meaning or so I believe that I do.. great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thanks man, and the slashes are simply because i feel some type of way about putting periods, just b.. read more
Nice work :))Thanks for sharing :))!

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

TY ; )
zaisham9393

3 Years Ago

YW :DDDDDDDD
Nice work :))Thanks for sharing :))!

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is really good!! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


The last line is an epic end, so lovely, well done!

Insight.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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New Jersey Devil, FL



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