Fusion

A satanic revolution/

 Demonic illusions/

 Popping bottles of deluded, an educed delusion in which/

Theirs a need to burn crucifix's/

 Tying nooses to necks for the next person to speak up and step in for the Constitution which/

 Has been thoroughly diluted, with water polluted by hate crimes that alluded prosecution/ 

Blurred the lines of black an white/

Caused confusion an interracial prostitution/

 Ironically resulting in the solution/

 //A new color of grey after the fusion//  

Reviews

[Some Kind of Poet]

This is good. I agree with AaronFreitas, it's creative. Perhaps a proofread, however, as there are a few grammar mistakes and a few words written incorrect. 'Tying nooses to necks for the next person to speak up and step in for the constitution which has been thoroughly diluted with water polluted by hate crimes...' < I love that part... it is so true and resembles society a lot. Keep up with the work!

[Calamityofgin]

Loved this..lol to be perfectly honest..did not think that I would..
Grammar errors do not bother me here...there are pieces that need to be pristine..there are pieces that should reflect you and all your ways. This is the latter.
Sick flow..Eminem gone all socio political....

Love and wishes for one over the line darlin.....lol

Calamity of jen

[BLitZeD]

glad you liked it and yea me grammer sucks lol

[Calamityofgin]

Honey I'm a born bred hillbilly...I can speak correctly..but in most mih stuff I let it fly how I naturraly talk..nothing wrong with being you..obviously a smart dude.
Nice work...

[annalysiar]

Short and simple much like a shot.
efficient the way the truth should be..
great work.

[wordman]

a poem about life,and hate and different breeds and creeds
i liked it

[AaronFreitas]

I like the thoughts... definitely creative. " ironically resulting in the solution,
a new color of grey after the fusion, " I like those lines best :)