Story of an Ang3l

Story of an Ang3l

A Poem by BLitZeD

He can catch it,

Steel from the ratchet,

Trim his top, F**k a tomahawk, Gimme a hatchet,

Maybe a rusty ax, Some gas, And a box of matches,

Add in a Jason mask an ill show you some sad s**t.

This is the death of another tag,

Tag ripped 

like a soul from a body, sooo...


I'm no longer a SoLDjA,

 No longer a GHOSt,

Not even BLitZ3D,

This is OM3Ga AGG3L0s,


Grab the bull by the horns because i got horns like a bull.

Just missing the right side, it was ripped from my skull.

I bear the scares of a warrior, earned in full.

If the horn ain't enough, check the bent up halo.

I play 4 both sides , Stand tall and Creep low.

Quick to burn threw ya, an slow smoking a O.

 Always been Alpha, I liked to play that part.

Now i'm out-casted, a choice made in my heart,

Because if u think for a second that bravos made a move, 

 You didn't stand  a chance from the start.

Every things been planned out.

I dug my own grave an covered it with a f*****g tarp,

Only move your making is one into a trap,

 Jeronomo, 

a precaution, to cover my tracks.

A hunter cant hunt whats hunting him back.

The classic story of how opposites attract.


An when your attacked,

Like a zombie to a Hashin,

 A cat to a rat, 

A bat to a rat. 

A gangster with a bat to a rat,

22. threw the black to land in the back of the rats back for ratting behind your back like a rat,

Call that echo location, 

An that rat bagged up in the trash, dispatched naked to an undisclosed destination 

© 2015 BLitZeD


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Good one Blitzed. keep going

Posted 8 Years Ago


Really powerful and raw! Nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I bear the scares of a warrior, earned in full. you already know your biggest fan.. you take readers to your world and that is what a true artist in any form does.. xoxo

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

always a flattering review from you :) thank you my dear poet. im glad you enjoyed. thank you very m.. read more
silent poet

8 Years Ago

always welcome!!
I read a comment on this saying it was unbalanced and i have to disagree. The way you write is unique indeed but it is fitting to your style, I believe. This work is marvelous and once again I am impressed by your rhyming skills, intentional or not, because I do not have the capacity to write good rhymes. Great job, Blitzed. Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Blitzed, the website system auto-corrected the spelling of your name. I spelled it right. Now I have some great things to say and an opinion you may not like but it's just me being honest. First, the writing is incredible. You may not like the band but I can see these words being made into lyrics in a song by Linkin Park. It's got that hip-hop/metal edge to it that screams for a Linkin Park sledgehammer backbeat. Now my opinion: I think your writing is good enough to not feel you need to do the bizarre spelling of words. It's a gimmick, and I don't think your writing needs to be bolstered by gimmicks. It's not just that I'm older; if I was 25 I'd be suggesting the same. Gimmicks are necessary to call more attention to something that may not warrant the extra attention. You are PAST that! My opinion, do what you'd like. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

honestly, from your comment i feel like you really do like what i write. and i appreciate that. Unle.. read more
Nice wording!
I also like the meaning!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sounds good but unbalanced
Not bad overall again very expressive

Posted 8 Years Ago


sounds like you poured it out,i can see a rap song here

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like it a lot!! your words come faster when your mood changes, you dig deep 4real.. nice work

Posted 8 Years Ago



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