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A Poem by BLitZeD

My mind wanders to some really fucked up places
Everyday its like a exploration
Everyday i wait for exportation
I've proved more to myself then was ever needed
I've already exceeded my expectations

© 2015 BLitZeD


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dan
It doesn't necessarily take a long write to make an impact with your words. This piece says so much to (potentially) so many in 5 short lines. It takes a good writer to excel at that. I guess that makes you a good writer? F****n' right it does! take care...dan

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

I am pretty proud of this one. I wrote it with the intent of doing a full piece. I wrote this in lik.. read more
dan

3 Years Ago

I often try to write as sparsely as possible, leaving a raw pounding image where a much more flamboy.. read more
For just a short poem you already captivated me :) i love it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thank you much, glad you enjoyed it
Great poem of just a few words :)
The rhyming is simple and strong. I would only change "ive" to "I've"

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

lol, thank you very much....and consider it done
BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

I've is correct?

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Added on June 1, 2015
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BLitZeD
BLitZeD

New Jersey Devil, FL



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