E.T

E.T

A Poem by BLitZeD

I describe myself as a lion 
a demon
a creature of myth 
an alien being
within these notes that i teach
 humanity's meaning
abductees all scream 
because this world we are leaving 
that in which i wish to destroy 
at out next meeting
plasma on the page, its critical,  
E.T's bleeding 
there is no home to phone
 the cells that are sleeping 
like farmers they hoe. 
my words they are seeding 
morals out the door, 
rights that im heaving
gore will hit the floor
in these writes that your reading
beauty's in the eye of the beholder 
well behold, the insides of a beast you are seeing


© 2015 BLitZeD



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I'm a newcomer and haven't read a great deal of poems. But this one was one of the few ones that had a rhythm/flow throughout. And it is the rhyme that differentiates a poem from a normal piece of description.

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

Tjank you. All of my stuff rhymes btw
Direct and on point good work


Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

Thank u sir
BLitZeD: Great imagination, very clever. The world is filled with this chaos, those demons now. The visual of no way out is good; interesting writing...the world control comes to mind. Some very good lines. Thank you very much. Dale

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thank you very much
Confuser

3 Years Ago

My pleasure....Dale
We all hpld a beast within who rears its head as we give free reign. Everyone a bit different but at heart, perhaps the same. The

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

i would have to agree ;)
''as Stephen Hawking said do not try to contact ET'' .....he may be more ALIEN or PREDATOR who wish for an INDEPENDANCE DAY

and Yes the insides of the beast i have seeing........

love it


Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

always an epic quote from you. . . f*****g love it lol
This is a excellent piece I love the flow and imaginary very creative
loved it :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

muchas gracias senorita
good flow of words in this one and an exciting theme.

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

glad you enjoyed man
Nice flow to the write buddy... love the descriptions and imagery :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

i always appreciate the love form a man of your skill level
I smiled a few times reading this. Laughed aloud through a few lines( not at you) at the thought. Said to myself ( only MM, ) in amazement...
had to stop go back and read from the very first line.. Then a grin at how genius you pen from a thought and out of no where lost worlds are defined, described you take light TO dark and what most can't see? You bring alive..

Bedtime stories, amazing wonders, call it what one will.. You will always find a place in life... Because there's no place your mind can't take you..

Artistically and creatively penned.. (brain of Einstein) . Note worthy

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

absolutely flattering review dear poet, thank you very much

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BLitZeD

New Jersey Devil, FL



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