Lion's Den

i write with hidden messages and under lying meanings , 

the lions in the cage, he's hungry, he's feigning 

im lying,  he's hunting , he's feeding 

his stomach was rumbling, he's lunging, he's teasing 

only the bones, that's all that he's leaving 

except for the skull, hear the mones, that's him teething

wind in his mane, while he's writing his readings 

and passing his grieving, his heart through this pen

can you hear that s**t beating?

Reviews

[dead scribe]

Nice, I notice an improvement in style and creativity

[BLitZeD]

thanks bro, been working on it

[wordman]

well i see the idiot is visiting you now,hell everybody on this site with a couple of expectations hate his sorry a*s , love the write my friend

[BLitZeD]

yea, strangely enough to go along with the stupid comment he rated me decently

[wordman]

well he does have a soul,he just sent john two e mails asking him why he was attacking me and anto ant trying to look like him