Dr.3a.m. Walker

Dr.3a.m. Walker

A Poem by BLitZeD

Im lucid in these dreams
my words are fluent, like fluid down stream 
a poet who knew it, spoke the truest for others to review it on screen
even tho this pen levitated to his hand, with the paper on his team
his ambitions revoked, so smoke raised from the bowl of his green
he lay dormant and sleep, until provoked, the most hateful of mean
no one here to save you, not even an angel. 
lean where u want, you'll find no shoulder in God nor Gabriel
so second thoughts leave a menorah an dreidel still 
id rather flip a coin to some w***e or a maids aurora, 
board on restored Alice, bill me a floor up, in the florescent room,
 door to the palace, neon down the corridor,
 incandescent beams shoot forth when i roar, but inconsistent due
unsteady balance whispers, there second guessing you
lay on the floor, his bible, the scriptures he tore, 
pictures drip to the store, floor of the lie, unplug the cord, 
the matrix was just testing you 


© 2015 BLitZeD



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truly a lucid dream having variety of words in description

Posted 3 Years Ago


To be completely honest, it was very confusing. Much like an actual dream!

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

lol, well I'm sorry about that. its not about a regular dream if that helps. its about a lucid dream.. read more
I love the wording and the meaning!
Well done!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


very nice ( like fluid down stream
a poet who knew it, spoke the truest for others to review it on screen) ur way with how you paste thoughts together is always intriguing .. good write

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

lol, this 1s a tru story that never happened
silent poet

3 Years Ago

Nice.........
beautiful metaphors ,loved the ending

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very creative and so different
I feel such an edge in your wording

Really cool

Posted 3 Years Ago


Umm...sorry...but...what?! ?

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

a representation of lucid dreaming
A writer

3 Years Ago

Lol. I have no idea what that is. Lol.
BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

being fully awake and aware during a dream

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Added on June 13, 2015
Last Updated on June 13, 2015

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BLitZeD
BLitZeD

New Jersey Devil, FL



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