Look @ Me Now

Look @ Me Now

A Poem by BLitZeD

Look at me now/
A crook, wonder how/
They stand and stare, so shook of me, wow/
Wont roar ill just growl/
Let um soar to the ground/
An oxymoron and proud/
An oxy w***e on my sound/
Rough night on the town/
Pour out the bars, I wish you'd get loud/
A god from the clouds/
Witnessed a lot of you now/
The potential is there, but my words keep you bound/ 
Maybe its mental, out rips the hair/
So ill try and push you, into a star if you dare/
What i say is kush dude, take a chair in my lair/
A new challenge is welcomed/ 
but a challenge is rare//

© 2015 BLitZeD



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Hey that's great, me being an old guy (66' shush! not to loud) this rap style is something different but you make it really great to read, it's not an easy style to write I'd say so your work is exceptional :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


great one :) i heard about you from dan, and i really like the style you write in.

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thanks man, glad u liked it, n a ty to dan as well
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Blitzed, Very powerful and evocative. Your style seems to be crystalizing with each successive write, and I mean that in a totally good way. The rhyming is well played, and I especially like how you end each line with a slash, except for the last line, where you use two. A clever format to accompany the original piece of writing...and a great lion graphic also. Very well done. take care...dan

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very nice wording!
Keep it up!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Has a tone of conviction...nicely done...

Posted 3 Years Ago


A powerful and direct poem! I really like this one!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Yeah!!! This a great poem, I love it! Great meaning, great beat. Good job. Keep it up.

Posted 3 Years Ago


this is a nice little verse, I'd be interested to hear it spit as you meant it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

me to. . . but quick would be tempo
Precise, enticing, mocking and really skilful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thank u rana
I like the flow very nice would make for a good battle. ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

:) .
Sultrysoul

3 Years Ago

........ :)
BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

;) .

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BLitZeD

New Jersey Devil, FL



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