Lost Roses **Lost Rose & BLitZ3D**

LOST ROSES

*Lost Rose & BLitZeD*

I'm so sick of your liein 

You make me feel like dying

Don't you remember how you said you'd always be there

Now you're walkin around like you don't care

I'm done with you

Nothing you say is ever true

So just stop trying.

I cant even look at you

In shame your face should be hiding 

Next time you see me ill be replacing Oh Ryan

Plead your case to someone who cares, i don't got time for your crying

Im already in the stars, cant you see me standing here shining

and to think, I took you serious for no reason or rhyming 

Get the f**k out of my way, you got terrible timing

 Theirs s**t to be done, I need to be out there grinding

Author's Note

*Lost Rose * -- http://www.writerscafe.org/Invisiblewriter

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

Excellent, the anger and tenacity come through really well, it fits together beautifully, the only thing I would recommend is a quick spelling edit but other than that it's perfect :D Great job!
(I'm so sick of you LYING, THERE'S s**t to be done)
Only tiny things but it'll just give it that extra bit of awesome!

[costa siwale]

incredible lyrical 'collabo', nice work

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Keep up the great work!!

[AaronFreitas]

Nice collab... I like the contrast in styles... could definitely tell which writer wrote which piece but that's probably because I am familiar with and a fan of you work. :)

[lostnstars]

The poem feel like it is a rap, and kind of informal but overall, i quite like your whole thought and the tenacity and the flow were amazing. Please keep on writing, you're amazing :)

[BLitZeD]

aww so sweet

[dan]

Dealing with liars is a colossal waste of time; your diatribe telling the liars to get out of your way is so well placed, the anger so justified. Lying is the most deadly form of deceit, it hovers and lingers seemingly forever. Nicely written. take care...dan

[Johnny]

well done of the two of you!!! It really sounded like music radio quality!! just add some instruments to those words and you got a hit! keep'em coming!!

[Dead]

Awe thanks

[wordman]

a dam good fight ! i mean colab,great job

[annalysiar]

Nicely done creative it flowed beautifully

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Nice, I really like it! Good flow and rhyme. Thanks for the RR