Lost Roses **Lost Rose & BLitZ3D**

Lost Roses **Lost Rose & BLitZ3D**

A Poem by BLitZeD

LOST ROSES
*Lost Rose & BLitZeD*


I'm so sick of your liein 
You make me feel like dying
Don't you remember how you said you'd always be there
Now you're walkin around like you don't care
I'm done with you
Nothing you say is ever true
So just stop trying.

I cant even look at you
In shame your face should be hiding 
Next time you see me ill be replacing Oh Ryan
Plead your case to someone who cares, i don't got time for your crying
Im already in the stars, cant you see me standing here shining
and to think, I took you serious for no reason or rhyming 
Get the f**k out of my way, you got terrible timing
 Theirs s**t to be done, I need to be out there grinding


© 2015 BLitZeD



Author's Note

BLitZeD
*Lost Rose * -- http://www.writerscafe.org/Invisiblewriter

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Excellent, the anger and tenacity come through really well, it fits together beautifully, the only thing I would recommend is a quick spelling edit but other than that it's perfect :D Great job!
(I'm so sick of you LYING, THERE'S s**t to be done)
Only tiny things but it'll just give it that extra bit of awesome!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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incredible lyrical 'collabo', nice work

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very nice poem!
Keep up the great work!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice collab... I like the contrast in styles... could definitely tell which writer wrote which piece but that's probably because I am familiar with and a fan of you work. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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The poem feel like it is a rap, and kind of informal but overall, i quite like your whole thought and the tenacity and the flow were amazing. Please keep on writing, you're amazing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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BLitZeD

1 Year Ago

aww so sweet
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dan
Dealing with liars is a colossal waste of time; your diatribe telling the liars to get out of your way is so well placed, the anger so justified. Lying is the most deadly form of deceit, it hovers and lingers seemingly forever. Nicely written. take care...dan

Posted 1 Year Ago


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well done of the two of you!!! It really sounded like music radio quality!! just add some instruments to those words and you got a hit! keep'em coming!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dead

1 Year Ago

Awe thanks
Excellent, the anger and tenacity come through really well, it fits together beautifully, the only thing I would recommend is a quick spelling edit but other than that it's perfect :D Great job!
(I'm so sick of you LYING, THERE'S s**t to be done)
Only tiny things but it'll just give it that extra bit of awesome!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a dam good fight ! i mean colab,great job

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done creative it flowed beautifully

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, I really like it! Good flow and rhyme. Thanks for the RR

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