Bunker Busters

Bunker busters, im throwing missiles in clusters 

12 gauges  and pistols I raged on the officials 

Official tongue twisters on this page, ballistics residual, 

Resisting individuals, tempers flare, thermal visuals fizzle blue,

 Murder rituals result in tiny violins at the victim's vigil

....Held In Honor Of When The Violence Ends....

 Habitual biblical consequence praying for a miracle, 

Bodies draped over the fence, the streets war criminals,

Convicted elites with no sense, even the titanic was convinced 

Its unsinkable

 

 

 

Reviews

[Emily]

Very poignant work, in so few words! I especially love the line "Held in honor of when the violence ends..." Great write!

[jesserose99]

a style unto your own, and words so needed so painfully true. yes they hurt but they need to be heard.

[BLitZeD]

ty for your kind words. i tried to friend request you but it wont let me :(

[BlaqkShadow]

This is epic hun, so descriptive and powerful, so anxious and edgy. Fantastic work as ever , keep it up! :D x

[BLitZeD]

:D :D

[Celie Rose]

I really enjoyed your poem. It was deep and strong.. Depiction of war on the money. Theme, emotions
well expressed. Good job. Keep writing.

[BLitZeD]

Thank you much

[~S.S.A.F.]

That's a strong sense of war. i would love to comment about it but i have a friend that wants to be a Marian and this just hits home for me. but the unfilled descriptions make it so that the reader can imagination whats going on and have a lot of free space to picture there own version of a war. it gives everyone a chance to picture the other as a enemy and gives a good sense of the feelings of hate, grief and even the feeling of eternity, like a never ending cycle that just has no end.

[BLitZeD]

I hope all goes well with your friend

[E G TEN]

Always such imagery you had manage to uphold
Mr. BlitZed, "Bunker Busters, I'm throwing-
Missiles in clusters" I'm digging that
Opening, robust @ panoramic
At the same time. Way
Cool' Thanks for
The send.

[BLitZeD]

glad you liked it buddy. happy holidays to you, hope all is well

[annalysiar]

I'm digging that flow. Great write,

[BLitZeD]

: )

[dan]

BLitZed, Your writing grabbed me and shook me from the get-go, as usual. The bombastic language serves to reinforce your message of never-ending war. I was in the service for 6 years (peacetime) and know I would never sign up now if I was the same age. How many have to die? Great writing, sir. take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

:-) thank u

[Bear]

The bombardment of ordinace tossed about by your oration was staggering when viewed with open eyes and irenic wisdom behind the violence of your words becomes clear. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[BLitZeD]

thank you bear, amazing vocab in your review as always

[Dead]

This is cool :)

[BLitZeD]

thank you .