B-82

The raid was long, snipers, bombs;

Dirty, Nuclear, Neutron, Hydrogen, Napalm.

Disarm? its an alarm clock with a Tsar. Im gone.

Electromagnetic, Clusters, Bunkers, Thermal energetic. 

Stars in a jar, thousands of them mustered. 

You can come on with it, Kamehameha's no misconception.

 Let's not forget s**t, I'll drop you like a fly, guess which direction.

Thousands of them must hurt, wish upon a star you had got to stepping.

Rounds barking like dogs f**k the mustard, 

Duck down, don't catch up, points are clustered,

Good Lord in Heaven, this real s***s Hellish.

If I could change anything, I'd go back and just choose the relish.

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Author's Note

just a quick write

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

This is both haunting and funny which I can't say I've said about anything else, whilst the nuclear aspect has huge significance and emotion is contrasted with condiment phrasing XD my favourite line is the last one, not sure if this was meant to be funny or I'm diminished in some way but it was :D XxXx

[E G TEN]

You went straight up digital on this piece Blitzed, a pinpoint write and
The end diagram is quite a finish. well done, very cool, thanks EG.

[Emily]

I really liked it!!
Keep it up!!

[annalysiar]

Quick. And strong. Great write

[dan]

The era of self-destruction is upon us, and when I say "us" I mean the WORLD. Wars have existed since man picked up a f****n' rock and threw it, but few every were felled by well-thrown rocks. When we can now be killed by the thousands by nuke and sizzle, destruction will turn global, lots of smoke...lots of sizzling flesh. I often wonder if this was all I left for my son and grandkids?
A powerful piece, sir. take care...dan

[Celie Rose]

I enjoyed your poem. Good theme, Very impressive description of war. Raw, Good flow and rhyme. It was filled with strong emotions. Really liked this stanza, "Rounds barking like dogs f**k the mustard, Duck down, don't catch up, points are clustered," Well written. Keep writing.