oh the irony

See as far as im concerned

 

My life is over.

My one forever love has

been snatched away,

condemned by my own

father's rules to die,

just because he loved me.

 

I am without a home,

without a single person to love.

And after having

discovered love,lived for a short time

while surrounded by love,

that is too much to bear.

 

The few people

i once called friends have

betrayed me and caused

the death of my husband and

out innocent never to be born child

 

And so they should die too.

All of them.

Their lives will end

at a sacrament meeting.

Such lovely irony!

Reviews

[Rocans]

As I always contend-pain and despondence are the best fuels for poetry. This was well done since your pain has been left on me in transience. Well done.

[RedInk524]

Sounds more like well deserved vengeance than irony. If they are foolish enough to believe in hell then bring it with your bare hands. There is no irony, people are simply worthless and you cant expect better.

[Legolas]

Very emotional poem. The pain in it is very powerful. Great job!

[ATG]

A very dark and emotional poem. It has a strong sense of depression behind it. It also seems to have a grain of truth behind it making it significantly more sad. Overall though, the poem was very well written.

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

i loved it! i felt the emotion in every detail you entwined into this. very nice

[Skye]

Grief and saddness are prominent, I feel for this poem. Beautiful...

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW.... very deep, sad and emotional.... way to write it out !!!

[eighwoeifj]

The sorrows of one's life is overdone. Yes, it does make for a very emotional poem, but after reading many of them, they all start to blend together. Nothing really stands out. I'd just be careful of that in the future.
It is a decent poem though.

[itai]

You are an interesting Read!