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A Poem by Summer

 

 

Sensual love deceives one as
to the nature of heavenly love;
it could not do so alone,
but since it unconsciously has the
element of heavenly love within it,
it can do so.


© 2013 Summer



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great + very effective msg through ur poem.........
i liked + loved really.........the all few lines represent their own meaning,i think......
it's such a deep thinking......ur word's scent me...............
i wanna give u now 88/100....
really i loved it.............
may god gift u a preety beauty.................
have a lovley day..........................

Posted 4 Years Ago


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hmm, have to ponder that one. Kinda feel like I'm going in circles when I read it. I may need a example or demonstration.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Summer

4 Years Ago

of course...now where to start. ;)
the enlightenment of unconditional love to the tones lusting the conscience mind stroll ....interesting anecdotal piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


A heavenly write...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Summer

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
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Fantastic work, you are such a talented writer. I can't wait to read more!

Posted 4 Years Ago


great poem. with a technique of being quite brief so the message goes down the memory. I will rate you a 85

Posted 4 Years Ago


Summer

4 Years Ago

I heard from someone on here that an 85 is like being bored, not good.
Amadi Judith

4 Years Ago

85 is an A. to me 85 is high and on a second thought if 85 is considered low then I think 90 would d.. read more
I like this poem, it is very gracious and harmonic. Good job. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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LG2
It's easy to get confused between love and lust and difficult to get both at the same time, I like way you have interwoven the meanings

Posted 4 Years Ago


Summer

4 Years Ago

Life is always confusing. But I think the one always inspires the other.
LG2

4 Years Ago

Yes they are natural catalysts to each other
amen to that!

Posted 4 Years Ago


I like the way you use the words and description in the poem. You twist them to leading the reader to a logical ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Good sensual love can indeed be heavenly when all sense of time is lost and we are totally in the moment enjoying bliss. I like the picture, it is a good representation of time in slow motion, an element that both literally and metaphorically allude to good love making.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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