My Tulip~

~I love Tulips~

Coiled up in calm dream,

sleeping deeply closed

between the scented

orange walls of my tulip

....

Until the rain storm

comes and take me

away in the wind

together with my

peaceful flower-home.

 

 

Reviews

[Elisa Laura]

I want to be there too! I feel at home! the opposite in nature so haunting can make a dream come true, when it rains, your thoughts shall be there, home sweet home.

E.L.

[zainul]

Great expression.
Lovely write.

[None]

Calm to turmoil, this piece's triumph is in the contrast between the imagery of the too. The sound of you word choices really feeds the imagery. Great work.