AND I LOVED AGAIN

i thought i was immune ,i had wisdom i joked at myself ,but you said you loved me ,you never loved me,oh the fool i was

 

had a dreamy tranquil life

Sleepy happy graceful nights                                                                                   used to love me all my life and rejoiced

In being wonderfully alive                                                                                       used to love everything I did

Never for once did i regret

My walk through lanes of life was steady strides

Full of joy laughs all dreams

Serene Thoughts I had piece with me

Myself I loved and...and then I loved her... I just fell... and loved her

Yes she came full into my life

I told me love was not for me,no... no more for your bones getting old and cold

Never ready for aches and breaks and... tremulence

I had never known for I liked simply my life free and no

Worries restraints, where then she came even bad dreams

Things I never known before 

You said you will fill my life to brim with joy I never known

I rejoiced for a while at everything yes,

I lived everything I saw and ready to break the peace I always known

For I loved again i cried yes,aloud i loved again, yes I broke my oath again and again...  ............................                  

Stirred every wave in my being, I was not ready for

Is love always torment, or it's only you, the more I come to you

You come to me, shaking all grounds under my feet, why me

You say you loved me you died for me and I felt it???death only for me

So why I feel tormented... all the while

You sit by me and I dream of that lovely face but oh soul you always

Told get away for fire knows nothing but to burn and mess with your peace

I say I want to feel it one more time, even if to my demise then i go, I know

She offered me a lot but I saw nothing but wild fire coming !!!

I like to get warmth but you sound like you also... made an oath to break every part... of me

Is love really so cruel, as I never known 

Oh the fool I am I told myself again and again stay away, stay away

But you will never leave me be for you said, come here, I told you, she said I loved you

Silly what more my youth I gave, I want it back

What? You do not want to die,but i am your death

To be continued...

 

 

Ibsen the dramatist once came to land of Arabia, he was enchanted at the charm he saw ,he loved a young lass, she lured me ,she danced ,he saw the beauty and was happy ,but all suddenly she came to laugh at him ,you fool she said ,you old you thought you dreamed and kept laughing, so he just gathered his clothes and walked away, from the deep snow then to the Sahara then back again to the freezing cold, he walked wisely away ,laughing,thinking i was a joke...

 

Author's Note

i just loved that dramatist IBSEN and the way he pictured how he, the wise and know it all, was fooled by a small Arab girl,it was so symbolic i could hardly catch his meaning...,she lured him ,danced for him until he was full in love and dozed and fell asleep,but she took the chance,she laughed at him and ran away,like making fun of him,from the freezing cold he came to the hot Sahara ,he found magic and found her,he was a fool ,then back to the icy cold he strolled back,laughing all the way

Reviews

[Bubo]

A very strong piece.............packed to the brim with emotions we have all felt.........this really struck a
chord with me

Stirred every wave in my being, I was not ready for

Is love always torment, or it's only you, the more I come to you

You come to me, shaking all grounds under my feet, why me


It is how I felt a year ago........and that pain never seems to ebb, even in the happiest of moments,
and the sadness is that we lose faith............you write with tremendous feeling.

[Karen666]

Oh i love this piece.....ive been through this before....its great to read it on this poem. you are a wonderful writer. im glad to find your work.

[justjenn_2u]

This is an interesting write. The tenses change but I feel you mean't to do that.

I can tell this is a poem of having instinct that a certain love was not right for you, but instinct wasn't followed.

This poem presents a lesson to be learned. Love can burn!

Good job!

[Aileen]

i like it nice job. its verry powerful, it shows how you can never truely know a person
your friend
Aileen

[Gandré]

I like the lyrical beauty and lightness of this poem. Not only Ibsen loved to travell to arabic world, also painters artists did, the Germans befire WW 1 loved Tunesia the white blue houses I've seen in paintings, Emil Nolde, Paul Klee has been there, too

And woman is seductress. Eveb subconsciously. Without knowing. This was very pretty poem. I enjoyed very much. I canno rate it technically impossible with BB. Pls send me what u like me to read - a link pls.

ThanK you for your reviews. L

[Helena]

"For I loved again i cried yes,aloud i loved again, yes I broke my oath again and again... ............................"

Amazing write, I just had to review this after reading it yet again. Oh, what fools
love makes of us. We keep breaking "oaths", fall and made fools of by "love" again, but
we keep doing it! Do we ever learn?

I truly adored this write, you did a wonderful job and I wait patiently for the next
chapter Moayad!

Helena :)

[Wondering Mind]

This is again filled with raw emotion. Your prosec( the ones I've read) remind me of the beauty in the wildreness; natural, raw yet, so graceful.
And, by-the-way, man has no option except to be fooled: whether he admits or not but, some men are Granted a priceless gem with whom being afool becomes so unimportant that one feels like the King of all the lands

[Brianna Brie]

Stirred every wave in my being, I was not ready for

Is love always torment, or it's only you, the more I come to you

You come to me, shaking all grounds under my feet, why me

Such intensity. This is a really masterful piece. Loved it much.

[J.Black]

WOW this piece just hit me with emotion.
"
had a dreamy tranquil life
Sleepy happy graceful nights used to love me all my life and rejoiced
In being wonderfully alive used to love everything I did
Never for once did i regret

My walk through lanes of life was steady strides
Full of joy laughs all dreams
Serene Thoughts I had piece with me

Myself I loved and...and then I loved her... I just fell... and loved her
Yes she came full into my life

I told me love was not for me,no... no more for your bones getting old and cold"

Love the words that you chose to use in this because it did enhance it that much more. Powerful and intense, they way it should be told and you nailed it hard to my heart, thanks!!!

[~angelalala~]

this is beautifully written & very powerful. "For I loved again i cried yes,aloud i loved again, yes I broke my oath again and again... ............................

Stirred every wave in my being, I was not ready for

Is love always torment, or it's only you, the more I come to you" love does feel like torment at times & everyone is left to wonder, is it really worth it? a wonderful, beautiful, sad poem.

[Rain]

I think it would be hard to find someone who has lived a while, who hasn't said " I will never love,again." I think your words will be understood by many. It is such a hollow feeling you write of. Great piece. Rain..