The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2017 bluessadmood



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Author's Note

bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 8 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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often time we find comfort in that which we should push away
wonderful imagery thru stark words chosen
thank you

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

3 Months Ago

Ohh thank you my friend,so honoured that you read this hope you liked it.
The word order here and there was a bit rocky, but as a rap song with a strong beat, this could make a powerful impression.

Thanks for sharing.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
wow....this was fun reading and lovely!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

5 Months Ago

Thank you so glad you liked it.
such a beautiful poem, very relatable, life is a b***h i wish she could die i have social anxiety

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

5 Months Ago

Life is horrible but no dear never wish to die..always love to live..on your own rules..life is a bi.. read more
A very interesting take on life...loving life because it can be cruel....but never hating the cruelness it can be. Only loving every bit you can get because every raw emotion tells you, you are alive. I really liked this poem. I know you warned us not to read, but that just peeked my curiosity.

Posted 2 Years Ago


bluessadmood

2 Years Ago

thank you..yes but this is really how i see it,and more hate it and push it away..so whenever it hit.. read more
I find this very good and emotional. =]

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

3 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading.
David

3 Years Ago

You are very welcome! I like you view. it is a taste of reality. Many of us feel that way. please re.. read more
bluessadmood

3 Years Ago

sure my friend,i will read soon
HA ain't that the truth? Don't ever say 'don't read'... This was pen'd from the soul with gusto, can tell you meant every word of it....go you!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

3 Years Ago

yes tell you the truth since the beginning of life,i wanted it that way
always at the bottom,s.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha to each his own, but you know what they say, nothing venture'd nothing gain'd....be bold live a l.. read more
Don't read?! It intrigues me!

Strong writing style, compact...overall its good!

Keep writing!

-Eliot

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

3 Years Ago

thank you.
I really loved this piece a lot - it was powerful - very sad - but presumably very truthful - it is so well written with great words, and great form

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

3 Years Ago

thanks a lot
Good job! interesting approach... Review mine too if possible

Posted 3 Years Ago



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