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The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2017 bluessadmood



Author's Note

bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 9 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Really, I take this journey further in real talk, reality,
It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear, my dear life is dear
to the heart, where blood is dark, crimson in light of dark
So I smell blood all over this, dried up like combustion on iron
fists of life, right hand of a b***h and the left hand of a b*****d
He never knows what she is doing, because she doesn’t know herself
the only home they know is none, homelessness, because they
have no others to compare 2, but this 2 shall pass through
life’s hands just like the pain in carpal tunnel, now ain’t that a
B***h

Just 4 Fun

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you so much ,really loved this take,the way you take this further,grand,ha ha
you know i.. read more
Flowrite

4 Years Ago

Sorry, something my friends and I use to do: start a piece like this and people just add to it becau.. read more
bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you so much then ,so glad you liked it
You seem to be on a mystical path. Feeling good about life really doesn't have anything to do with what's going on around us, and everything to do with what's going on inside of us. Before we may find that gem in a haystack we must embrace the haystack, or before we may find enlightenment within chaos we must embrace chaos. You have embraced chaos. We're the content of our minds, and not the content of our possessions. If we have too many possessions we may never reach the top of Enlightenment Mountain. There are some mystics who assume that mind, karma, and soul are interconnected: Perhaps so..perhaps so...?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you so much.
One must read when told not to, that you must understand and I found it not underwhelming.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thanks a lot for reading,much appreciated.
Thomas Fitzgerald

4 Years Ago

Your very welcome my darling.
You know, if someone says don't read something, i just have to read it...I'm a rule breaker. I did not find this "disgusting"...I see it is art. Art isn't always pretty, my friend, but that does not mean it is unrelatable or off putting. I can see this for what it is...an emotional outburst of sorts. Trust me, I have these all the time.

Posted 4 Years Ago


bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

ohh dear,you really feel like that too,ha ha,i thought i am the only one who is so strange to this p.. read more
Girl Friday (Sarah W.)

4 Years Ago

I can appreciate this type of "art", and I respect the artist even more for having the courage to ju.. read more
bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

what a beautiful response ,so honest
first of all, let me say that i love the music on your profile! secondly, i love this write, so profoundly resonant and real and highly identifiable to me. my mom used to say "life is a b***h and then you marry one" and my dad used to say "life is a b***h and she is in heat again" either way, they were both right in some sense. thank you for the thought provoking verse, nicely done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading this,hope you liked.
quinfinn

4 Years Ago

truly, an enjoyable read, much acknowledged.
I like the poem. And a few of the others are right. lolz If you say "Don't Read!", it only makes people curious and want to read it even more. It really is a good poem though. :) Well written.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

i know thats how life is,thank you
this is very puzzling i know..but since still very young when i touched and read the minds of some i came to know this..if you loved the material world then just stick to your well ordered
pretty much arranged life..but if you wanted adventurous life,life of a writer and a dreamer
then you should rip yourself from all the others ..its only when you no longer sleep your nights..when you never know anything about tomorrow..and nill of what it will bring you
you are completely blind to whats next to come..then you are on the right path to total chaos
the life of a dreamer..though in rags and may never fit anywhere..i know he is on the right
track to explore like no one other ever did..ha ha..i think my mind is all in chaos too,ha ha..this is a response to my friend review,R.J.Askew..thank you

Posted 5 Years Ago


The irony is intense in this.

Tis a lovely write, even though the subject matter is not.

Personally it makes me feel weak because my life is so orderered that I am in danger of collapse whenver I stray one tiny little bit from my ordered known. In my case order is a prison and predictability are the bars. I don't know if I cld live outside this prison.

In some ways chaos is Life. Life seems to love chaos and still survives. It is as if chaos tests life and only the best of life survives. But I don't know if this is correct. I think in ordered societies dullness survives. Order or chaos, we are never happy. The grass is always browner on the other side. Sigh. Great write from you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Too repetitive. Obvious Rhymes. Good effort though... and I liked the content.

Posted 5 Years Ago


You project power in describing the darkness and pain within you or in the fictional character you're projecting. Having said that you have technical issues with tense, i.e. "have" would have worked better than "having" in the first line. Plus your use of punctuation could have been better. But you capture emotion so well.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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